From the moment Luke took his first step into Neverland, a magnificent, tiny golden fox tumbled into him!
In front of his eyes, beams of light lit up the land like the sun. His eyes squinted as the sections of colours glared at him.
He stood. Rooted to the spot! His heart pounded with excitement! Amazement swept through him. Where was he? Could this place be real?
The path that lay before him, sparkled like diamonds, as flowers like candy whispered and gasped!
Behind the chocolate breathing plants, candy butterflies were fluttering and dancing in all directions. saw them.
They got back at just the right time because dad hadn’t noticed they were gone. If he had, it would have been a whole different story! And in a bad way!

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  1. Amanda Harris

    Well done Nathan and Will
    I like the idea of candy whispering and gasping, not to mention chocolate breathing plants. I wish Luke could have had a longer adventure before getting back to Dad – maybe time stops, then they won’t be late?
    Best wishes

    Feb 03, 2015 @ 6:47 pm